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Fireflies Dance

Lovers kiss under a full moon, as fireflies dance among the trees While sounds of crickets chirping Play a lovely melody

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2012 9:06:00 PM

Thank you Joseph, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

Reggae Magnet

Date: 12/20/2012 11:51:00 PM

For those who have lived the experience, this poem is so much more touching. I can also hear the crickets chirping, nightfall.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/20/2012 6:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Joseph xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/19/2012 8:44:00 PM

Joseph :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2012 4:07:00 PM

I'm happy to see this made the winners' list, Joseph. Wonderful.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/11/2012 5:57:00 PM

an idealic scene! Light & Love

Joseph May
Date: 12/12/2012 7:08:00 AM

thank you Debbie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/11/2012 6:19:00 AM

Very expressive and descriptive depicting the romantic..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Great job..Winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Joseph May
Date: 12/11/2012 2:52:00 PM

thank you Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2012 10:54:00 PM

It's very pretty, Joseph. For Susan's contest?

Joseph May
Date: 12/11/2012 5:33:00 AM

thank you Andrea...yes

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 9:47:00 PM

love your tanka, romantic, with a good upcoming sound..pd

Joseph May
Date: 12/11/2012 5:33:00 AM

thank you PD