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Fireflies

do you remember the night you took me out to watch fireflies? we stood there, breathless as they illuminated the night sky they danced in a way that set the entire scene aglow the pale rays reflected off the fresh fallen snow our cheeks were rosy from our running haste so close, i could count each freckle on your face your hazel eyes shining you seemed in a trance until you grabbed my hand and started to dance in the night, we enjoyed this elysian view you were looking at fireflies i was looking at you

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Date: 5/15/2017 5:10:00 PM
Hi Ken, I really enjoyed this read. A wonderful write. ( where you meant to type 'trance', you left out the "n" . I thought you might like to know since it changes the way it is read)
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Date: 5/15/2017 4:03:00 PM
Very sweet, Avery:)
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