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Fireflies

Fireflies Last night my son and I went out under the stars And in our arms we carried mason jars With holes cut in the top of the lids We went out to act like little kids Catching Lighting bugs in the air Chasing them here and there And if we were lucky to catch a few The lid of the jar came unscrewed We waited to see that blinking light That seems to light up the entire night Back and forth we covered the yard Cause catching them was so very hard Oh what a sight we must have been To crazy kids walking around like hens But who cares that the neighbors think My mental capacity isn’t on the blink It’s what my son wanted to do And I was all but willing to carry it through It was a fun night out and we had a blast Catching Fireflies is a real gas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/15/2011 2:32:00 PM
Your son is very fortunate to have you as his father. A really good write, but on the downside, I think it would read better and have more impact if broken up into four-line stanzas. This is merely a suggestion and yours to do with as you please. I still think it reads like a cracker as is. Well done. :))
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Date: 6/15/2011 11:33:00 AM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Jeff. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 4:48:00 AM
Catching fire flies sound fun,as fun as flying kites or watching stars at night,lovely warm poem.. C.C
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Date: 6/14/2011 7:34:00 PM
this is so sweet. im sure you and your son had a blast catching the elusive firefly! thanks for this...e.b
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