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A winding road, up through the trees, finds California gold The heart will race, and breath escapes, to see this land unfold! Dad cherished, this, his boyhood home, a wonderland to view and shared with us the years he grew, into a the man we knew A home he loved so long ago, but never quite outgrew Our family albums back at home, held pictures of lost years When Gramps had been a mountain guide, my heritage is here When summer came and school was done,..our family couldn't wait To camp, explore, and marvel ore', this jewel at Heaven's gate No picture, song, or poetry, prepares astonished eyes The valley called Yosemite, invites a heart's delight Hidden in the canyons of Sierra's mountain glade Immortal is a valley, which was carved by glacier's blade Winter melts to spring, again to quench the giant trees Dogwoods lace the forest floor, azaleas scent the breeze Redwoods dig their roots between the stones that reach the sky Earth and sky meet hand in hand, where eagles nest and fly The Bridal falls, the granite faces, we stuttered to describe The meadows green, the mirrored lakes, Ahwahnee lodge resides.. The Mercy River cools the brow, in awe of what surrounds Embrace the peace as evening falls, that mummers nature's sounds El Capitan, and Half Dome seem to reach the stars so high Reflect upon old stories told of fire in the sky A fire built upon the cliffs, then sounds of ancient cries A call from down below would rise,... would echo from above And rocks would pour a flaming veil, and spill a song of love The call of love, from tribes that roamed, a hundred years ago Days long ago, my childhood eyes, were dazzled under stars We'd sit around the campfire light, he'd sing and play guitar We looked upon the granite face of Half Dome, overhead And watch the burning embers fall, and hear a song so sad A native call still fills the dark, within the heart of me A place where soft light still cascades, and Daddy sang to me ................................................................................................................................ A look at Yosemite: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y5RQp77uVPA

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Date: 10/1/2013 8:37:00 PM
A deep winning poem Carrie....SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2013 6:28:00 PM
Really really emotional poem and well deserving win Carrie....congratulations..
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Date: 10/1/2013 4:34:00 PM
this is another excellent piece from you, carrie, very evocative and nostalgic, really takes the reader there; congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/1/2013 12:17:00 AM
I see you used an older poem too. And it's a beauty that I admired before. Love its nostalgia. Congrats, Carrie.
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Date: 9/30/2013 8:32:00 PM
Carrie, this brought tears to my eyes. Such a beauty..congrats. BG
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Date: 9/30/2013 8:31:00 PM
Carrie, this brought tears to my eyes. Such a beauty..congrats. BG
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Date: 9/30/2013 6:25:00 PM
this poem is filled with such descriptive images...enjoyed the read...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/30/2013 1:04:00 PM
Carrie, thank you for this enchanting entry. I loved every line of it, and had to really study hard to decide between it and Andrea's poem. It's an amazing piece!
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Date: 9/30/2013 12:03:00 PM
Congrats Carrie, nice in the woods win...Linda
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Date: 9/30/2013 11:38:00 AM
Contest Winners: In the Woods. Sponsored by: Caleb Smith. - Congratulations on your wonderful poem in this contest, Carrie - Pleased to read your poem, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/28/2011 5:10:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2011 8:03:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Carrie. I've been to Yosemite once or twice many, many years ago. It's an awesomely beautiful place. Congrats on your win! Kim
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Date: 12/27/2011 7:45:00 PM
Great story of your family life and how this place affected you, Carrie. I got your pictures today. What a great family you have. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/27/2011 5:22:00 PM
A beautiful poem. What a lovely place it must be. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/27/2011 4:47:00 PM
Would love to visit this place some day..congrats on this awesome write..I can picture a special campfire with your dad singing...Congrats, Carrie.
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Date: 12/27/2011 3:23:00 PM
You know I thought Bob Hinshaw wrote this man was I trying to find the verse to tell you! LOL [give me my dern periods!!! if you are going to do [, and ! and ...] oh how it killed me for you not to have periods LOL Congrad's my dear Carrie a majestic write! Light & Love
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Date: 5/21/2010 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in the contest "Viva Vacation" sponsored by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/6/2010 8:42:00 PM
Carrie, there was no doubt in my mind this poem was going to fare well in the contest. I love the story. I love the structure. And I love the descriptions. Congrats - not just on the ranking, but on your overall talents as a poet. I love your work. Joe
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:16:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your 4th place win in my Viva Vacation contest.. an amazing write ..appreciate your support.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/25/2010 11:22:00 PM
Carrie, I really love it. It is so descriptive. Some great poems coming out of this vacation contest!! Yes,I've heard of Roy, UT. Do you have Mormon relatives from here? I think I have only passed thru the ntl. parks in so. Utah, but I've seen lots of postcards of the sites. haha. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/25/2010 5:59:00 PM
Wow - an absolutely wonderful poem and lovely story. Not only do you do a great job describing a beautiful land but you do it within a heartfelt story of your kinship with your father. Simply lovely. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/25/2010 1:53:00 PM
Yosemite is always a joy to visit and I feel like I just had a mini-trip there in your words. Half Dome is quite a site, isn't it, Carrie? A guide told us a glacier cut the dome during the last Ice Age. What fun trips our family took out west and it sounds like your Dad was much like mine. Enjoyed! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/25/2010 1:44:00 PM
Wonderful tale of a lovely vacation memory. You are a true poet. thanks for your comments on my Three Wishes. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/25/2010 11:16:00 AM
Great descriptive write that is informative of the area in which you grew up...Makes me want to go there....Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 4/25/2010 10:37:00 AM
Good luck in the contest, have your self a great one,..p.d.
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