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Fire Trees

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Written July 4, 2023 10.58am

engulf all green leaves shades of orange and dark red… grand bright flower balls range from the distance replicating summer sun… big bees’ lollipops

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/14/2023 10:29:00 AM

My dearest friend Len, what a delight especially "big bees' lollipops." Your wonderful haiku set pops with color and the bright sun of summer and takes our eyes into their enchantment! Such a creative view and point of view, dear friend! Congratulations on your win! You have truly captured summer's delight! Sending you blessings of summer joy!

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/12/2023 6:49:00 PM

Creative imagery, Len! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/12/2023 11:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Love your ending. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2023 9:56:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations, Leonora :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/12/2023 5:39:00 AM

Len, congratulations on your winning placement, colorful imagery!

Bill Baker

Date: 7/4/2023 4:01:00 PM

Lovely imagery in your Haiku today, Len. You do beauty, just right. Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend. Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 7/5/2023 7:45:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comments my dear poet friend Bill. May God bless you always. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/4/2023 3:06:00 AM

- A sweet "heaven" for the bees ... lovely written, Leonora :) - hugs

Len Gasun
Date: 7/5/2023 7:44:00 PM

You're right my dear poet friend Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comments. God bless you always. Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/3/2023 10:19:00 PM

I loved the ending. Well done.

Len Gasun
Date: 7/5/2023 7:43:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comment my dear poet friend Victor. God bless you always. Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 7/3/2023 9:15:00 PM

you reminded me of the activity outside fireworks exploding scarring the poor dogs for the 4th of July.

Len Gasun
Date: 7/17/2023 4:37:00 PM

A Summer Haiku x 2 - Nature Themed Contest Judged: 7/12/2023 5:07:00 AM Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin PLACE 3- (UP TO 4 MULTI-W)

Len Gasun
Date: 7/3/2023 10:04:00 PM

Oh, is it? ha ha ha... but that's how fire trees bloom here this summer my dear poet friend. Thanks for reading my poem and your comment my dear Eve. Happy 4th of July. Blessings to you always. Hugs