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Fire In Her Body

Mid-life street woman from red town she was...I grew up with her under mango trees now softly drooping their shoulders much like hers.. but she, still contoured like a Paul Gauguin urn, is wrapped in arms lovely in flesh and heat: fanned banana leaves swaying to samba notes while cooking fried bamboo roots; her fragrance buzzing along summer's exotic beat. How she then pinched my cheeks with her tapered fingers still pink on veins floating through her quivering body… Somehow, she gave me this epiphany of touch; the slow wave of body rhythm lightly fondling the rosiness of my adolescent skin. If i knew how to pivot in the wakening garlands of Latin steps, it was her ample hips winding and bellying in nights and morns of her own wanton sashays... Oh how I long to climb her mango tree, her waxing then waning shape still blazing among bursting seeds of female treachery or finery. I tell myself, there is no age when her fire sways in places where tropical eyes dazzle with her near flowing, soaking limbs…so tenderly wild because she, Livia, nymph of the forest raw, has nothing else to lose. © for Debbie's Women, and SKAT's Poem #2 by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/9/2012 11:25:00 AM
Nette congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/8/2012 10:01:00 PM
Beautifully penned,Nette.Congratulations on your great win!
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Date: 5/7/2012 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the "Tell us of Women" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations nette. Another find read.
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Date: 5/5/2012 9:43:00 AM
Awesome write dear poet ! Fire all about it ! Have a wonderful weekend Nette ! Much love, james
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Date: 5/4/2012 1:41:00 PM
adding her name did not take away from her mystery ;) so many of come and go nameless..we as woman, at least we can remember them by name for they have identities unto themselves outside of the roles given to them and accepted by them..to loose ones name is to cease to exsist. Light & love
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Date: 5/4/2012 1:32:00 PM
Written as only you could Nette; this is what makes us female. Lovely descriptions to describe the moment!
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Date: 5/4/2012 6:47:00 AM
who is she...does she have a name if not give her one..close the gap for the reader bring us nearer..you know her..let us know her..go past observation..immerse us..Light & Love
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Date: 5/2/2012 8:43:00 PM
What a juicy write, full hipped. Just awesome-- her fragrance buzzing along... is my favourite line. I plan to play with more of this device soon. Hugs, Cyndi. PS will write something fresh I think for your contest tomorrow. I am just so so tired tonight. Oh, honey, take care of you! I keep thinking you're better but not! I have no advice to give you. I know of no herbs or natural remedies, but I so wish I did. Natural solutions have helped me in different ways. You are worried about. ;)
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Date: 5/2/2012 8:20:00 PM
wowie, looks like written from a man's point of view. this is really good, Nette. By the way, you need to redo your centering. It's saying unsupported code next to your poem. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/4/2012 6:48:00 AM
woman can appreciate the beauty of another woman..beauty disregards sex
Date: 5/2/2012 6:13:00 PM
A beautiful way to tell womanhood in a story Nette. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/2/2012 2:55:00 PM
A vivid portrait of womanhood you have portrayed in this intriquing and colorful poem. Beautifully expressed in words as well as imagery. Mahalo
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Date: 5/2/2012 2:35:00 PM
beautiful nette, love the pic and your words, and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Date: 5/2/2012 9:46:00 AM
awesome nette just wonderful. harry
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Date: 5/2/2012 8:49:00 AM
an intriguing write and amazing as always Nette kluv.. kudos on every line luv..
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Date: 5/2/2012 6:53:00 AM
This is beautifulliy written..love the imagery...wish I knew how to dance..lol
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Date: 5/2/2012 5:53:00 AM
An amazing write here Nette.Just love it!
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Date: 5/2/2012 4:23:00 AM
I love it nette, beautiful written...some have it all and some nothing at all...we have to share love and that is free. Have a lovely day nette. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/2/2012 4:03:00 AM
A very powerful portrayal of an intense topic, nette, hugs, jag
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Date: 5/2/2012 2:06:00 AM
Nette, you portray a wonderful here..David
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