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Fire Exit

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Fire Exit

Half between 
I was on that same 
old stairway, adoring 
your air.

You were standing against kettle people.
You were waiting for the next rocket bus.
You were radio-free and mob-less, as usual.

Half between 
I strummed my 
frustrating romances,
adoring your air,
though you’ll be 
far, always.

Ca. 2006

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