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Fire Down Below - Haiku Contest

Sky is burning red Looks like heaven is on fire…. Clouds like puffs of steam Sky reaches to earth… As the red glow emulates Through fiery trees Nature at it’s best Vibrant picture pains the eyes… Scene like burning hell penned 20 August 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2015 3:59:00 PM

very FIERY, Seren. You did very well showing the flames of a red sunset sky!

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/27/2015 5:56:00 PM

The sky must have been sunny here it warmed me up lol....Seren

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/20/2015 8:06:00 AM

Lovely haiku. Well expressed. All the best for the contest. TFS

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/27/2015 5:57:00 PM

Hello Ravi, nice to see you, thanks for leaving a comment....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2015 5:11:00 AM

such a vivid string of haiku Seren good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/20/2015 8:02:00 AM

hi glad you liked it .....Seren