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Fire and Sweet

The fire is burning where water can't reach... Our bodies are in tangles to where our lips meet... Smoke has filled the room as the flames cascade high... A bed filled with passion as two lovers fly... Our words are drenched with juices so sweet... Ice cubes dissolve on skin laced in heat... I crawl to the spicket for just a drop to refresh... And then back to fire where I do feel blessed... dedicated to my one and only ~Rosanna~

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 5/7/2012 8:19:00 AM

A very sweet, sexy and charming poem, Michael. Enjoyed every words you chose. :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/7/2012 7:06:00 AM

Lucky girl xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/7/2012 2:06:00 AM

hot one here, Michael, enjoyed this wonderful poem. such a awesome tribute to Rosanna. harry

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/7/2012 1:57:00 AM

Superb write dear poet,I enjoyed this much.

Shirley Long

Date: 5/6/2012 10:54:00 PM

This is a well-written poem filled with much love and joy, I enjoyed reading every captivating verse in it, the verses are electrifying and delightful, good write.

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/6/2012 9:52:00 PM

Ok...*whew* I can't read many more of these passionate poems tonite...lol this is a fabulous write for Rosanna!! What a wonderful tribute to her!! :) but you guys gotta cut an ole girl some slack and rate these things so I can plan ahead :O LOL *blush* I'm lookin for a fan now...;) big hugs,love to you and Roseanna! :)

Debra Squyres

Date: 5/6/2012 6:00:00 PM

such passion !!

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/6/2012 5:58:00 PM

nice piece Mike!!

John Rhinem

Date: 5/6/2012 5:38:00 PM

Ps. Smile ˜ "Come Here Baby, 'Kissss Me With Your Soft Sweeet Lips.'" *

Good Night

Date: 5/6/2012 5:27:00 PM

really good poem everyone on this site is really talented i rate this one a 7

David Williams

Date: 5/6/2012 3:34:00 PM

Michael. I love it. if my barbi gets cool I know where to get it fired back up, well done my friend...hope things are getting sorted..David

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 5/6/2012 4:17:00 PM

We are all puzzle pieces my friend , some fit some don't. Lol

John Rhinem

Date: 5/6/2012 2:45:00 PM

Smile ˜ Boy If I Were A Girl, I Would Probably Find Myself Thinking Bad Thoughts, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Michael * I Can See The Steam Rising & I Think, Wow ˜ My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜

Date: 5/6/2012 4:34:00 PM

...."Your Welcome, 'My Beautiful Michaela.'" *

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 5/6/2012 3:33:00 PM

Thank you John!!

Date: 5/6/2012 2:48:00 PM

...."A Burning Hot Favourite, 'Amid Flames Of Beauty.'" *

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/6/2012 2:41:00 PM

Lucky Rosanna....so beautiful poem Michael!! - oxox (love) Anne-Lise

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 5/6/2012 3:34:00 PM

ok what time does Arild go to sleep?? lol

Date: 5/6/2012 2:50:00 PM

...."Yesss, 'Absolutely.'" *

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/6/2012 2:38:00 PM

You are truly blessed Michael.. Loaded with passion for sure. A gem of a dedication to Rosanna.. Had to laugh at Gwen's comment.. Hugs ;-) CTC

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 5/6/2012 2:41:00 PM

Ok Gwen , I'm on the red ye... again lol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/6/2012 2:33:00 PM

Now fly over to my home and give my spouse some poetry lessons!!! Hurry Michael, he has ten months til the next Valentine's Day! This poem is smokin' hot with a dedicated passion! She is a lucky gal! :) Gwendolen

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/6/2012 2:26:00 PM

Thank you Gail!! She inspired it and is it... luv n hugs to you always... Michael