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Fire and Ice

The whispers of indifference dispel the glory of the hour when tender moments meant so much and roses blossomed on the bower. we frolicked as the days grew long, rejoicing in the innocence, the youthful, gay exuberance, when love was new and hearts were strong. Then the shiver of the leaves, the bitter cold, as one bereaves the passing of omnipotence, imprisoned now by circumstance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/12/2012 3:21:00 PM
Oh, it is so sublime then the worst happens; Indifference is somethingI don't understand, it seems life is more alive when passion is the driving force. Tis a shame when it all sinks as you say in the last verse says. Such angst to feel in this.
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Date: 5/7/2012 9:10:00 PM
Outstanding imagery, Keith! The last verse is followed through with the "shiver". The flow and rhyme is as impecable as always! Keep well and stay fit! Love, Mikki
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/7/2012 10:13:00 PM
Thanks, Mikki, for your comments, and for your friendship! Love, Keith
Date: 5/5/2012 10:00:00 PM
Keith, wow... a very unbreakable bond broken and imprisoned by strong circumstances.. Your poem is deep and breathless... enjoyed.... have yourself a good night~PD
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Date: 5/5/2012 11:04:00 AM
I'm a sucker for a good rhyme, love it
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