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Fire and Dreams Don'T Mix

5 am at your front door, past out from the night before, Do you find me disrespectful? What a shame it wasn't your place, I'm such a disgrace, How could I be so forgetful? I do remember 4 am when the fire still had an ember, It was then I saw your cute face, But it seems that it was just a dream, As I ended up in a fiery brace.

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Date: 3/3/2024 11:27:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/5/2016 4:24:00 PM
AIDAN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV -- LINDA--
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Date: 1/2/2013 6:53:00 AM
nice write Aidan
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