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Fire

First, a wispy curl of smoke Hovering in the air, it spirals calmly Then, a single tongue of flame Tasting the air for the first time It leaps and dances with youthful energy Growing larger, it likes what it finds It crackles and snaps as sparks fly It roars, consuming with a voracious appetite Always hungers, yet never thirsts Its steady glow flickers next, and casts shadows Where there once was light Its embers settle and sigh, reflecting on past times Now it takes a final breath It is warm to the touch still Yet it is cold inside, living as a lingering memory Thus, the fire dies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/6/2016 1:32:00 AM
Nice...
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Date: 7/31/2016 4:06:00 PM
Oh, that is such a good description of fire -- I am truly jealous. Great write. :-)
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Date: 5/11/2016 12:24:00 PM
- Hi Fiona :) - Thanks for your first poems, lovely and well written:) - Poems can say much or little - A poem tells me, thoughts, wishes, dreams, wisdom, happy or sad ...... deepness or powerfully - Most of all, have fun and welcome to PoetrySoup :) - // Sun :)
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Date: 5/11/2016 12:11:00 AM
Fiona,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/10/2016 12:45:00 PM
Fiona, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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Date: 5/10/2016 12:41:00 PM
Excellent personification of fire, Fiona - it paints a great picture full of delicate, orangey hues. I extend to you the warmest of welcomes, to PoetrySoup! I hope you meet lots of wonderful people here, and blossom in this here - our creative community. ~Michael
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Date: 5/10/2016 6:34:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Fioma. :)
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Date: 5/9/2016 4:45:00 PM
Fiona, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/9/2016 1:46:00 PM
Lovely descriptive write.
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