Fire

Tempestuous wildfire is raging; leaves behind charred forests. Humans are careless beasts; camp fires and cigarettes destroy all life. Easily avoided with caution; forests could be saved.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2014 8:01:00 PM

Good message poem for all. reminds me of the Smokey the Bear commercials. Well, I love reading sijo and haiku. thanks for the ones I saw tonight!!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/24/2014 3:46:00 PM

Thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/11/2014 12:39:00 PM

This is so true. I don't understand how people can be so careless. Two young boys playing with fire burned over a thousand acres on our mountain ridge that burned for over three weeks because fire trucks could't reach the area. A great Sijo you have created M.L. Aloha, Connie

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/20/2014 6:29:00 PM

Thank you.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 10/10/2014 3:47:00 PM

Dear M.L. You are on fire.....poetry burning, fueled by heart! 7 Hugs, chuck

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/23/2014 5:07:00 PM

Much thanks