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Fire

i cant help but stare as it dances the warmth hitting my face it is perfect it is perfection

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/11/2009 11:42:00 AM
Beautiful poem... this is the first meditation lesson.
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:53:00 AM
I think it is a man thing. It is nice to have a warm open fire on a cold winter's day. Keep writing. Like the style of this one. Sara
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:05:00 AM
Watching a fire, can be memerizing. We had a campfire recently while in the mountains, and we can sit and stare and watch it for hours...there is just something about it....
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