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One of the quickest poems I've ever written, it took 10 minutes. Maybe it shows, lol. Just more reflections of changes in my life lately.

I'm finished, can't you see? What I'm doing is for me and my life preserver's small so there's room for one, that's all It's my time to break all ties to the mindsets I despise And I truly am quite bored with the clashing of the sword I no longer have the fitness for your lunacy to witness Your dark world becomes diminished for at long last I am finished 3/12/19

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Valerie Staton

Date: 10/18/2019 5:15:00 AM

There's only room for one more individual. I pray his name is Jesus! I love reading your work Michael. God bless you and keep you!

Michael Wise
Date: 10/18/2019 5:49:00 AM

Who else? :) God bless you too!

P.S. Awtry

Date: 4/26/2019 11:45:00 PM

10 minutes? Only because you are a natural! I especially like: my life preserver's small so there's room for one, that's all. Another excellent write :)

Michael Wise
Date: 10/18/2019 5:49:00 AM

Many thanks P.S.! :)