Fingertips

fingertips still reach I recall when our palms touched will we recover http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-15.php

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 6/28/2011 10:27:00 AM

So powerful! I love this! I hope this isn't a true poem about your life. Growing apart, and maybe unable to stop it, can be truly heartbreaking. tell me this isn't happening to you.

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/25/2011 12:27:00 PM

I like to think there is always hope James :) lovely senryu and loads of smiles from me

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/24/2011 5:18:00 PM

think my next contest will be romantic senryus, like this one maybe, hmmm theres a thought

James Fraser
Date: 6/24/2011 5:22:00 PM

Francine, your contests are a joy. Once I learn to read the rules, I may enter the next one. Chuckles from I, have a lovely weekend :)

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/24/2011 5:17:00 PM

touching senryu James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/24/2011 4:15:00 PM

Good Haiku..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material..Sara

Richard Moriarty

Date: 6/24/2011 4:06:00 PM

I've been here, done that...wow! memories..thanks James