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Fingertips - Poet Destroyer-

Fingertips - Michael J, Falotico - Written by: ¥ Destroyer ¥ Poet FINGERTIPS (( collaboration MICHAEL J. FALOTICO )) by~ MICHAEL J. FALOTICO I reach in the dark with my hands stretched out the window.. My fingertips feel your vibe as the breeze that carries you starts to grow.. I close my eyes so tight and can almost feel your breathe.. Only way to hold you without taking a step.. With my mouth wide open I can taste your kiss.. What I can't see or touch is left in my head to miss.. Certain nights can almost feel the sensation of your tummy, being shaking in pleasure. The warm salty taste that forever is my treasure... by~ P.D: Finally! I feel your breath, I got you all to myself. Some how thousands of miles feel only a square foot away. Imagining you in arms distance comes with a tasty delight. Please my darling rest your weary head on my legs! Slowly massage your fingertips upon my shoulders. In hopes that I may give you more to explore. I surrender and value your gentleness ~ wanting more. I want to feel you with my eyes close' Gliding your fingertips with a touch only I desire; Your tenderness ignites me with an eternal fire. Greedily we will feel not wasting a single thought, including deep breaths~ you nor I cannot stop. Switching and opening the kisses you treasure! A Collaboration with * Poet Destroyer ~MY COLLABORATION CONTEST~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/21/2011 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your co-write win in P.D.'s "Collaborate With Me" contest Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D.,Michael
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your accomplished place in the contest "collaborate with me"...CR
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Date: 9/16/2011 8:11:00 PM
Great work of a creative mind..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:04:00 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Michael : )
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Date: 9/16/2011 11:03:00 AM
congrats on a fantastic win my friend
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Date: 9/16/2011 7:54:00 AM
Congrats Michael luv on a stupendous second place win with this collab with PD.. knew first time I read this one it was a chart topping top notch blend and winning wonder luv.. my White Knight has done it again and your Jersey Girl is in congrats mode ...luv always and forever ..xoxo...
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:29:00 AM
Batman.. lol.. I just love RIX` and that expression... stopping by to say hi and congratulate you on our nice and sweet piece... Hope you and your wife are well.... and enjoying life.. take care,..p.d.
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Date: 8/9/2011 1:24:00 PM
Holy Toledo, Batman! This is excellent. Love it! Great stuff... Gwendolen
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Date: 8/7/2011 1:30:00 PM
Well speaking of collabs, this one sure is a steamy, hottie one! You definitely gave pd some sizzling inspiration here and she sure complemented your part wonderfully! Thank you btw, happy you enjoyed my collabs with Chris :) hugs again!
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Date: 8/5/2011 12:33:00 PM
My God, Michael! This is wonderful. PD's line is awesome but yours, magnificent. You can describe sexuality in a posh way. The one who will always impressed, Dinda.
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Date: 8/5/2011 11:19:00 AM
a sweet, solid write from the both of you.. clap, clap.... with huggs! great collab..:)
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Date: 8/5/2011 1:10:00 AM
wow! Michael, you are the best.. and the comment you left made me prideful. It was a delight and honor to write this with you. Now I will step up and take that offer of writing a collaboration with you. One that is not for my contest or a romantic poem. May I throw the first rock. I have a poem in mind,... take care,,,p.d.
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Date: 8/4/2011 11:35:00 PM
as I mentioned previously .. now making ti a new favorite for my special archives .. luv..
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Date: 8/4/2011 11:33:00 PM
am still breathless from the first read earlier tonight on PD's page and now here again.. this will be and should be numero uno my W.K. .. these words touch so deeply with much romanticism and emotion.. I just posted Creating a Vision of Love to parallel.. your Jersey Girl in FINGERTIPS mode forever and always..good luck in the contest luv..
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:56:00 PM
wow, this is like really great fantasizing here, and the way that PD responded equally awesome. I bet she will put it really high in her contest!!
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Date: 8/4/2011 6:50:00 PM
I call this an automobile expense...Now I must go out and buy myself a snowball with no syrup in order to cool off! I am only grateful that my windows do not open lest I fall in the lagoon and drown! Thanks enjoyed....much....
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Date: 8/4/2011 6:38:00 PM
I loved this collaboration it is wonderfully written.. with such wonderful emotion.. cory
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Date: 8/4/2011 6:36:00 PM
An absolute pleasure to write with one of Soups most talented Poets... I had an amazing time writing for you...always Michael
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