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Fingertip Tracings Upon My Skin

Sunlight surfaced at the breach of dawn It climbed salty rungs to emerge from the sea When fully risen, what had been spawned? A molten fireball cast from the dragon's breath, a firey yawn exhaled in languorous flight searing tangerine flames across the horizon Daylight drifted over waking valleys and hills in dappled luminance of shimmering gold It danced in pirouettes upon my window sill and chased shadows from my bedroom wall until it tumbled on the bed where my love slept He stirred, I smiled and then wept with emotion at the passion glimmering in drowsy jade eyes With each rise and fall of his muscular chest the heated flush of desire within me burned Sinewy arms reached out for me... "Come back to bed," whispered from his lips and my gown lay puddled upon the floor I'd had enough of watching sunlight's strolling for it had stolen too many moments next to him My toes were cold from morning's chill but it was not from Winter weather that I quivered It was time to savor the sweet warmth of love from his fingertip tracings upon my skin

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Date: 1/10/2020 10:45:00 AM
This is beautiful. I love this masterpiece. Happy new year friend. Keep the lines blessing.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/1/2022 4:49:00 AM
Thank you for suck supportive comments.
Date: 1/7/2020 11:53:00 AM
Beautiful imagery leading to moments of passionate love, Lin! Excellent! Best regards // paul
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/7/2020 2:12:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Paul.
Date: 1/6/2020 9:32:00 AM
That's my girl...brilliant poetry Laney...when you write, the world is subdued...intoxicating poetry...love from the Wingster ^WW^ :o)
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/6/2020 12:42:00 PM
I've intoxicated the Winged One with my words. Now that's an accomplishment I'll remember for quite some time. Thanks so much for your love and support, J.
Date: 1/5/2020 11:11:00 PM
Brilliant poetry, Lin:-) Loved it! Just had to fav it.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/6/2020 2:43:00 AM
Thank you for the kind comment and the mark of favorite, Edward.
Date: 1/5/2020 8:46:00 PM
this is so beautiful Lin...laced with wonderful imagery and just the right amount of romance... :) hugs
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2020 9:09:00 PM
Thank you for such wonderful thoughts, Sandra. I appreciate each one.
Date: 1/5/2020 8:38:00 PM
Such longing and passion, tremendous write Lin, "searing tangerine flames across the horizon" ooh la la! Well done too bad you just missed my best free verse 2019 contest!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2020 9:06:00 PM
I'm delighted by your awesome comments, John. I doubt I would've entered since poems from others you had already praised when originally written are always entered with a leg up. I'm not really interested in contests.
Date: 1/5/2020 4:37:00 PM
Whoa, a wonderful sultry and beautiful penned romantic poem, enjoyed! :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2020 5:10:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Tania. Your comments are valued.
Date: 1/5/2020 1:36:00 PM
Beautiful write Lin, 'a sunlit stroll ends with romance'
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2020 2:14:00 PM
Thanks ever so much for reading and leaving your thoughts, Joseph.
Date: 1/5/2020 12:53:00 PM
Full of romance and passion Lin, written so well. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2020 1:25:00 PM
Many thanks for your kind thoughts, Tom.
Date: 1/5/2020 12:37:00 PM
WOW! such a sensual passionate poem Lin, you have come back with a bang!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2020 1:24:00 PM
Thank you for your ever present acknowledgements, Jan. I wrote it on the plane ride back home.
Date: 1/5/2020 12:36:00 PM
So romantic.. and filled with wonderful Imagery. Beautiful poem, Lin. Nicely written! Hugs Charlie
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2020 1:23:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie, for finding these lines romantically pleasing...and I appreciate your visit.
Date: 1/5/2020 11:13:00 AM
Wow Lin this was so romantic yet held a bit of sadness (ok maybe more than a bit of sadness) but so well written I mean what can I say! You are an amazing writer Lin!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/5/2020 2:30:00 PM
Amazing Lin!;)
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2020 1:18:00 PM
Thank you for the read and comments, Brenda, but I assure you she wept only because of the depth of her love awakening with need of her.

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