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Fingers Be Still

Reading the poems is thrilling, if you will eyes drop to comment poets raise their quill Arguments ensue rampant the ink is splashed on a proud poet whose dreams are soon dashed Take heed to notice there's none famous here only boast and brag with intent to bend ear you can never take back things that you've said try saying it nicely thus eliminate sheer dread Oh how we mock in the name of who's right? divisions ensue thus prompting a fight It's now become humorous to read the text we'll wait for tomorrow to see if YOU'RE next!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/20/2015 11:11:00 AM
Judy, Wonderful win. **SKAT**
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Judy Konos
Date: 10/20/2015 5:59:00 PM
Where Ya At SKAT!
Date: 8/21/2015 4:54:00 PM
So easy to pass criticism. Only some able to understand thin line between expressing healthy criticism and passing judgement. Very well written
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Judy Konos
Date: 8/21/2015 5:20:00 PM
Well thanks Samiha....and thanks for stopping by....
Date: 8/20/2015 10:08:00 PM
Misconstrued and then you're screwed when some one's feeling hurt. From something said that was misread and things end in the dirt. It truly is incumbent upon each and everyone. To do our best, be it in jest, to make sure it's still fun.
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Judy Konos
Date: 8/21/2015 5:07:00 AM
Great Write Robert....thanks for stopping by....
Date: 8/3/2015 3:24:00 PM
Rereading this poem here... Great message.
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Date: 8/2/2015 8:19:00 AM
I do not care to write what I would not wish to hear. Bravo ;)
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Date: 8/1/2015 5:32:00 PM
COOL moving image!!
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Date: 8/1/2015 5:31:00 PM
Very wise, Judy. I spill my ink from time to time, but I do not take back anything I ever say . I do not tell lies, so though I may regret speaking in haste, I rarely feel a need to apologize for my words. I like your poetic styling with this one!!
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Date: 8/1/2015 3:56:00 PM
Wise words indeed Judy and I love the image - great one lol:-) hugs Jan xx7
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