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Fine Weather For Leather

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Inspired by Robert L. Henshaw's Limerick - Heather's Feather

Heather decided to dance in leather A bra and a thong that went together But it got so hot Her gear slipped right off And the crowd raised the roof for fine weather.

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 10/12/2023 7:01:00 PM

Belle, I promised I'd visit, and your limerick made me giggle, and has encourage me to perhaps try one in the future.Again, congrat on your POTD.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2023 3:11:00 AM

thanks for the smiles Belle:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/21/2023 2:57:00 AM

Clever, Belle. Loved your write. Hugs.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/21/2023 3:59:00 PM

Thank you Victor, I’m so pleased you enjoyed this Limerick. Hugs, Belle

Robert Schatz

Date: 9/21/2023 1:57:00 AM

"loud" that is

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/21/2023 2:01:00 AM

I think load is a good expression for loud Robert, made me smile anyway. Thanks Belle

Robert Schatz

Date: 9/21/2023 1:55:00 AM

Damnit! You got laughin' out load again!!

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/20/2023 2:24:00 PM

So funny Belle. You are great at limericks! Made me smile a lot. Well done. :):)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/21/2023 3:57:00 PM

Thank you so much Christina, limerick’s are great for bringing smiles, a smile a day keeps the blues away :) Belle

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/20/2023 2:14:00 PM

quite funny, Bell. You made me laugh with your whimsical verse. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/20/2023 2:38:00 PM

Thank you very much Sara. You have a pleasant evening too. ~ Belle

Ink Empress

Date: 9/20/2023 5:19:00 AM

Hahah this is so funny! I loved it, It takes great talent to make me laugh, my sense of humor is pretty dry but this one made me laugh! Love this limerick. You are such a versatile poetess that can write anything and everything.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/20/2023 6:41:00 AM

Thank you so much for that ink, I love writing or reading Limericks… Belle