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Fine Kiss

Just a kiss so you wont miss The feeling so strong when we caress Wishing this moment would never last Until the world over turns to dust But what is it in your mind Love is always defined as blind Can this be real or just a fantasy But do not worry you'll just be fine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/21/2013 7:17:00 PM
You have to post many sweet poems like this...can't wait to read another one by you... PD
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Date: 4/21/2013 7:16:00 PM
Hi Jonathan, love is blind..... and I like the way you played out this little kiss.... fantasy or not, it will all turn out just fine.... an excellent and sweet poem... always~ Linda
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Jonathan Medida
Date: 4/22/2013 6:08:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 4/21/2013 12:55:00 PM
Jonathan, thanks for the lovely poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Jonathan Medida
Date: 4/22/2013 6:07:00 AM
You're welcome and I'm happy you liked it. You'll be part of my inspiration to write more.

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