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Fine Gifts

. I travel to much I have witnessed such fine gifts the bright eyne the hips

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/20/2015 9:00:00 AM

Wow! This is without a doubt a 7. I am so voracious for more of your lines right now and I definitely will come by to enjoy the bliss of your words.

James Peranteau
Date: 6/2/2021 11:01:00 PM

Belated many thanks dear poet! Much love, james

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/18/2015 4:00:00 AM

Excellent wording!!! Define much - my imagination is all over the place! Guess that's how a senryu is supposed to be. Much enjoyed! Always, Laura

James Peranteau
Date: 10/12/2023 10:54:00 AM

my apologies Laura...haiku ;)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/17/2015 12:51:00 PM

Very expressive in just a few lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/1/2015 11:02:00 AM

Hehe, I had to giggle while reading this James ;) thank you for the smiles ;) hope your week is a great one..

Constance La France

Date: 3/31/2015 3:48:00 PM

James, at least you saw the bright eyes first, lol, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry today, yes my muse is screaming . . .

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/30/2015 8:00:00 PM

Very nice pen James! I truly enjoyed your very expressive senryu dear friend. A 7! Wishing you a very lovely day! In God I trust !In his light! God bless you! :) D.

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/30/2015 6:28:00 PM

NICE! At least, you noticed the eyes first... Also dear poet, did you really mean "to much"? Anyhow, love your senryu...:) Kim

James Peranteau
Date: 10/12/2023 10:55:00 AM

my apologies....haiku ;)

James Peranteau
Date: 4/17/2015 4:19:00 PM

I just noticed a segment of your comment in regard this write dear poet. Just as you see it here is how I meant it. "I travel to much"...not tooooo much. *smiles* Never let that be said of this poet ! Much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2015 6:07:00 PM

Yes, I am sure you witnessed many a fine hip, James. A FINE write!!!

James Peranteau
Date: 6/2/2021 11:02:00 PM

Lil poke back when girlie...*winks

Jan Allison

Date: 3/30/2015 3:01:00 PM

I hope you notice a lot more !:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau
Date: 3/30/2015 3:32:00 PM

*winks* .. dids yah notice, I'm an eye man ? Eyes first ! I skips right(write) to dem hips girlie ;)...all the candy comes after dinner *smiles* much love, james