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…I am fine
I do not deny 
What I felt for you once
It passes
The sun does  turn into the moon 
As my love does fade from you
…I am fine
Though I do not look so
Hair tangled and dirty clothes
I cannot see the reason to hope
I do not pretend as you do 
…I am fine
Forgetting the way you held me
You saved me you felt me
let me do to you the unthinkable
And more
Lead me into my dreams 
You were not meant for me
To spoil ruin and break
I will not have this on my conscious mind 
…I am fine
These tears will dry
I need you to flea far away from me
So I cannot do more to you
So I cannot separate you into tiny pieces kept in boxes underground 
You mean fear in the morning 
…I am not fine
And I do not pretend to be 

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  1. Date: 3/13/2010 8:14:00 AM
    Tanika, how tough it is to walk away, but if you feel you have hurt someone and will continue to do so, you exhibit great strength in saying goodbye. Compassion is what this poem defines. Very well written and filled with emotion and meaning. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/13/2010 12:36:00 AM
    Like the krielle flavours here Tanika.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.