Findings

Give it a rest That's for the best Got it off my chest Thoughts unpossessed Trying not to be stressed Everything confessed Or easily guessed I feel unblessed Don't like how it coalesced Behaviour transgressed It's been addressed Trust reassessed Right now I'm distressed Become uninvited guest Should have honoured request

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Vickey Rhymer

Date: 9/1/2023 8:47:00 PM

A weighing of the balance,note taken Of status quo.The results of what was offered the litmus test.How does your love lay with me?Is it killing me softly or with thunderous roar.Or God be praised A healing balm that soothes what ails yah.Take note.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/3/2023 5:02:00 AM

This sentence just resonated 'A healing balm that soothes what ails yah' so important Vickey - thank you for your words of wisdom x

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/1/2023 10:04:00 PM