Get Your Premium Membership

Finding Yourself

Sometimes you may find struggle At times when you're all alone and haven't found the one above 'Cause you're too in love that You put everything aside Even if that means not being the true you inside What shall you do? Praying would do some good If you ever want to make it to Hollywood.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/1/2010 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Samantha. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 10/30/2010 9:17:00 PM
Interesting write, Samantha. Much introspection can be gained from your words and thoughts. Keep the pen flowing! Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/30/2010 1:44:00 PM
thn you for all the cmments..i eally appreciate it. : . )
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2010 1:34:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this one. You may want to change Prayig to Praying in the eighth line. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Best wishes with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2010 12:44:00 PM
Thank you for posting your excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Samantha. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Wishing you the best in any contestd you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love, Carol
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs