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Finding the Way

always traveling toward the sunset trip is either short or long perhaps accompanied by song and within a safety net living life without regret subtly guarded from all wrong always traveling in a melee of lane changing with the end nowhere in sight and an unknown hand arranging dark clouds to obscure the light always traveling By: Joyce Johnson for Nette’s contest “Rondine the Traffic of Life” 7/19/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/2/2012 9:54:00 AM
You never disappoint! Awsome..congrats. BG
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Date: 8/1/2012 11:59:00 PM
Joyce ;-) congratulations with your awesome win in Nette's,, traffic contest... xox~PD
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Date: 8/1/2012 7:51:00 PM
Love this Joyce!Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 8/1/2012 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "The Traffic Of Life" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2012 5:17:00 PM
I like how you did yours. The short lines remind me of how I did my own. Congrats, sweetie.
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Date: 8/1/2012 3:22:00 PM
Joyce congrats on your win...David
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Date: 8/1/2012 3:12:00 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/1/2012 12:46:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on an awesome win! I love the refrain and enjoyed reading it again...love and blessings
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Date: 8/1/2012 9:54:00 AM
congrats Joyce on a spectacular write and wonderful win for Nette.. impressive piece luv.. also thankxx for supporting my contest..
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Date: 8/1/2012 8:57:00 AM
so mellow and full of grace, joyce.. sweet congrats on your win in my contest!.:) huggs
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Date: 8/1/2012 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce xx
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Date: 7/20/2012 1:02:00 PM
Wonderful, Joyce! I love this form and you have written in it masterfully. Best wishes in the contest. With Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/20/2012 7:12:00 AM
nice one, joyce! good luck in the contest...
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Date: 7/19/2012 10:45:00 AM
Very Nice Joyce, like it xx
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