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Finding the Stolen

With my blue eyes I watched you find the lost The place that should have always been That place absent of shame and sin Colour separation was meant to be thin Like a little girl You found peace love and fun You were able to be the free one No fear of a police man with a gun You twirled and giggled in the sun It wasn’t fear that made you run The richness of your colour I marvelled at your state A deep dark joy meant to animate All I needed was to concentrate and freely share from my own plate When this world becomes one Only then will we satiate and begin to solve our prejudicial traits Before it is to late Through my flip flop view I witnessed you You sang poetic words so true Grasping them I flew Not away but towards you I needed to immerse in your blue For without being one people This place will never renew I admire your strength Despite the worlds cruelty For you occupy a place of duality Where to many brothers and sisters Become another fatality Yet you have a shared rich history So faithfully cling to your ability Even when others don’t provide civility You are on the precipice of Victory. Inspired by Olufunke Elizabeth Omolayo Ogunmodede and her poem “Through The Darkest Times” please read it, here is the link. https://www.facebook.com/groups/2650318775179582/permalink/3039494419595347/

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Date: 6/22/2022 9:19:00 PM
Oh wow Richard! What a genuine, heartfelt poem!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/23/2022 8:10:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 5/16/2022 3:46:00 PM
Wow! I read it. I understood it I RECIEVED IT. You did it with out any insults that the fake might mistakenly incert. Artfully and poetically done. I salute you as a fellow poet I've known these years. Good job. The Situation.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/23/2022 8:13:00 PM
Love this comment, thanks for the visit and read.
Date: 5/4/2022 7:54:00 AM
Hi Rick, how are you? I see no new poem has been posted, missing your powerful writes...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/23/2022 8:13:00 PM
Thanks for visiting. I did post a new one a few days ago.
Date: 4/25/2022 2:23:00 AM
I hope you are well Richard, it has been a long time since you've shared.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/23/2022 8:12:00 PM
Yes I’m spending more time these days on Facebook poetry sites. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 4/7/2022 9:22:00 PM
Savoring every line my friend, hope you are well... jim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/23/2022 8:11:00 PM
I am well. Thanks for asking and for the visit.
Date: 3/31/2022 10:44:00 PM
Where are Brother in Christ? Shalom health & prosperity in all this ngs, through Holy Trinity toward Thee, Richard. Anil S. Deo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/23/2022 8:11:00 PM
Thanks, I welcome blessings.
Date: 2/16/2022 11:02:00 AM
So, so, very beautiful Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/20/2022 6:19:00 AM
Thanks BJ.
Date: 2/14/2022 11:13:00 AM
WoW! Richard, I echo what “ Eshe”said. This is such a well written and profound write. Have a nice day- Alexis
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/20/2022 6:19:00 AM
Thanks Alexis.
Date: 2/8/2022 4:17:00 AM
Wow! Beautiful. Profound. True. Gotta fave this
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/20/2022 6:18:00 AM
Thanks Eshe.
Date: 1/11/2022 6:34:00 PM
Epic! Deep, beautiful, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/20/2022 6:18:00 AM
Thanks James.
Date: 1/9/2022 6:49:00 PM
A wonderful write Richard, and thank you for pointing us to the one that inspired it. Her poem written as one who has felt pain but who still hopes.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/20/2022 6:18:00 AM
Thanks James.
Date: 12/22/2021 5:26:00 PM
Hearfelt piece Richard, your humanitarian side shines with this exceptional write. Have a wonderful Christmas and peace and joy. Blessings Michael...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/20/2022 6:17:00 AM
Thanks Michael.
Date: 12/21/2021 4:03:00 PM
Lovely poem!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/20/2022 6:16:00 AM
Thanks Nancy.
Date: 12/19/2021 1:21:00 AM
Thanks for a beautiful write Richard. I really enjoyed this. xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/20/2022 6:16:00 AM
Thanks Mandy. Sorry I haven’t been here much.
Date: 11/18/2021 5:51:00 PM
I had to come re-visit this gem of poetic offerings. shalom, shalom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/16/2021 3:27:00 PM
Thanks Anil.
Date: 11/14/2021 6:50:00 AM
lovely sentiments here, my friend
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/16/2021 2:08:00 PM
Thanks Jack.:0)
Date: 11/12/2021 8:44:00 PM
Richard, wow, and thanks a million. Yes, I am sure the "Nigerian-American/world citizen wrote a great poem. But your response is so generous, so needed in this world, you give hope to those jaded as each revolution went sour with gold (South African during and especially since Nelson Mandela.) shalom, shalom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2021 7:09:00 AM
I love this response Anil. You are thoughtful in your informed words. I lack your historical perspective but am learning. Thanks for your visit.
Date: 11/4/2021 11:58:00 AM
Wow Richard … your heart and words go deep in this beautiful write filled with hope and pain. I have been away for awhile so just reading this now . I love For without being one people This place will never renew . We are born to be one . The heart knows this …. There is no other way . Hugs and blessings to you and yours, Susan :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2021 7:12:00 AM
I am not here much myself. I started a new site on Facebook so it’s been taking my time. It’s called The Inspired Poetry Project. If you have time please check it out. Thanks for adding your wonderful perspective. Hugs Rick.
Date: 11/4/2021 11:30:00 AM
p.s. Richard...updated avatar coming soon ;] james
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Date: 11/4/2021 11:10:00 AM
My dear poet; your write iz intense...i'd like for u2 remember this hypothesis uv mine(merely in my own words): "The corporeal likewise expressive 'diversity'; wuz at one time to be the beautiful traits uv us humans, az iz with the animals likewise fowl we all know uv and love 2 admire. Be patient, Jehovah God Almighty will as mentioned here(Acts 3:19 and 20) keep His Promises!"
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2021 7:28:00 AM
I think repentance is a hard pill for many to swallow so they hold tightly to the comfort of their sinful existence. They are fine with the blessings they feel entitled to. They fail to realize in God’s eyes we are one people. He sacrificed His Son for the World. Our neighbor is ourself. Mark 12:30-31
Date: 11/1/2021 2:11:00 AM
A lovely reply to a rich poem, Rick, your thoughts are so deep and noble, as is Olufunke's:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2021 7:13:00 AM
Thanks so much Jo. Blessings Richard.
Date: 10/26/2021 8:28:00 PM
Hello Richard ... I guess power, greed, and politics rule at this time, but thankfully individuals can find togetherness a pleasure without them - thanks Richard - Lindsay
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/28/2021 3:40:00 PM
Thanks Lindsay. Hugs Richard.
Date: 10/24/2021 8:17:00 PM
Seems you have found your life's mission, my friend. Go for it! Joy forever, Gershon
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/25/2021 7:53:00 AM
I don’t know about life mission but if all of us shift just a bit we can change the world. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 10/24/2021 12:37:00 AM
Amazing poetry, Richard, so doth spark a reaction and rightly so. I believe as a society we need to get rid of snobbery first within our communities. Then we can tackle the bigger issues. For someone born on the wrong side of the invisible fence, today is still a major problem. It all about being superior than someone else.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/25/2021 7:55:00 AM
I’ve learned over time that those with a strong need to be superior tend to spend their lives alone. I like your response Harry.
Date: 10/21/2021 3:56:00 AM
Nations must come together of every colour and creed, for our traditions norms and beliefs will then only evolve into one people on this planet we call Earth. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS POEM! Blessings and hugs, Jenny.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/23/2021 7:17:00 AM
Thanks so much Jennifer. Hugs Rick.
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