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Finding the Light

Yesterday a world black in satin sky, Painted patterns upon of dappled light, Whilst I enjoyed sonorous breathing waves. My ocean soul reclaiming crunching waves, A smile clings to the pure warmth of the sky, Whilst roots reach to the sprinkle rays of light. Birdsong, through their faint, meek, percussion light, Truce existence spills fresh acoustic waves. My threads of light reflect the twilight sky. Sky's silence in waves alive in His light. 11/10/2023

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Date: 11/15/2023 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write with a great ending. Love It...   Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 11/11/2023 3:45:00 AM
this is just beautiful
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/11/2023 4:52:00 AM
Thank you, that means a lot coming from you.Many blessings
Date: 11/10/2023 2:55:00 PM
your imagery was sublime, Eve. I loved 'ocean soul' as well as 'acoustic waves.' The ending was beautiful. Am faving this one, Eve. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 11/10/2023 10:04:00 AM
Your way with painting imagery is so delicately beautiful. I thought the words you’ve chosen and. How well you’ve crafted this. Goodluck for the contest
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Date: 11/10/2023 6:55:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page with encouragement. Sara K
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Date: 11/10/2023 3:10:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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