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Finding My Way

Hello darkness, my old friend Just when my heart is on the mend I realize I’ve built walls And no one listens to my calls When times get rough And friends just can’t be found Walls close in, I’ve had enough I wish I was homeward bound I wander empty streets down Past the shop displays In my own tears I drown Only in memories, my home stays So I shrug my shoulders And walk off to look for America The road ahead is filled with boulders Steeper than the walls of Attica A pocket full of mumbles, Broken promises I carry today As thunder from a storm rumbles Only with God’s help, I find my way
*For Tracie’s “Sing a Song a Poem” contest *Group – Simon and Garfunkel “Hello darkness my old friend…” from “Sounds of Silence” “I’ve built walls…” from “I Am a Rock” “When times get rough and friends just can’t be found…” from “Bridge over Troubled Water” “I wish I was homeward bound…” from “Homeward Bound” “I wander empty streets down, past the shop displays…” from “For Emily Whenever I May Find Her" “And walk off to look for America…” from “America” “A pocket full of mumbles…” from “The Boxer”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/27/2012 1:25:00 PM
Musical braids from the most beautiful of poets...memory lane has been traveled once again! Congrats on a very special win...the competition looked stiff and your unique work shone through! Love, GWendolen
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Date: 3/27/2012 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/27/2012 10:25:00 AM
Oh girl this is wonderful, i've sure missed lots of your poetry, lately because of time, but this is a reminder of the wonderful poet you really are, hope your health is ok. harry
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Date: 3/27/2012 10:26:00 AM
sorry got carried away, congrats numer one and deservsingly so. harry
Date: 3/27/2012 9:37:00 AM
congrats Caroly on a stunning first place win for these excellent music melodies luv..
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Date: 3/27/2012 9:27:00 AM
Loved what you did with these lyrics, Carolyn-hun! Just stupendous and though it takes a bit here and there from others, you made those words all your own. Such a well deserved first place win! Congratulations. Kudos to Tracie for her judging. Hugs, Cyndi
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Date: 3/27/2012 9:15:00 AM
Perfect song choices....some of my favorite all time lyrics, in your wonderful poem, Carolyn. Well done, and well deserved win!!
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Date: 3/27/2012 8:51:00 AM
congrats on your win with this gem.. cory
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Date: 3/27/2012 8:38:00 AM
Congrats on your well written, well deserved 1st Place win, Carolyn. Outstanding. Enjoyed. Great job, my friend. Best to you and yours. luv and huggs, Ralphie
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Date: 3/7/2012 11:58:00 AM
Don't know any of these tunes, Carolyn, but no difference, the poem is excellent. Love, daver
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Date: 3/6/2012 5:33:00 PM
This is SMASHING! Tho' it's the Favorite Jewish Music Duo behind the song...for some reason it reminds me of the LEGEND in Black, Johnny Ca$h! Carolyn, I would like to thank you tonight again, on the one year anniversary of giving my poem "Open Sores" a Number One Spot on your :"March Madness" contest. You don't know how much that helped my confidence in the works! I used to simply chuck my poems to the trash or an old shoe box...That poem just placed #1 for the 3rd time on the Soup!
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Date: 3/6/2012 2:10:00 PM
Cool- a great piece of inspiration-Always and only through the power of God!!Miss you my friend, I finally made it back. May God bring purity and love to your life. With love ^Rick
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Date: 3/6/2012 11:03:00 AM
Beautiful as alway Carolyn, loved this 'Simon and Garfunkel. I sm sure this will do well in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/6/2012 3:54:00 AM
Great job on this contest entry. You have made the words your own. A wonderful and emotional write. When God is your best friend, life perspective becomes more full...and joy can be found within. God bless you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/5/2012 7:42:00 PM
Simon and Garfunkel wrote many beautiful songs. You chose some great ones here. I was just listening to some of their songs on you tube last week. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/5/2012 2:54:00 PM
Lovely but sad piece, my friend
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Date: 3/5/2012 2:12:00 PM
Such a quality choice of lyrics they belong , good luck in the contest Carolyn , Hugs and best wishes ,Declan xxx
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Date: 3/5/2012 1:48:00 PM
Hello Carolyn,, wishing you good results in the contest..) and also positivity in yourself and your poetic journey,, yours Joe..)
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Date: 3/5/2012 1:01:00 PM
Fine choice of tracks to amalgamate into this fine poetry lyric Carolyn. Good luck in the contest with this gem :)
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Date: 3/5/2012 12:24:00 PM
Excellent poem, Carolyn. Simon and Garfunkel was one of my favorite groups growing up, and you used lines from all my favorite songs by them. This one's a winner for sure. Love, Kim
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Date: 3/5/2012 12:21:00 PM
Carolyn this is just great, I love it, good luck..David
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Date: 3/5/2012 12:20:00 PM
well done, this one is a toughy contest, I don't think I will attempt. Best of luck in the contest Carolyn
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Date: 3/5/2012 12:20:00 PM
this was awesome good luck in the contest.. cory
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