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Finding My Knight

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I live my days in hurt and pain Insecurities and despair In this hopeless chain That feels so unfair All I wanted was to feel loved Feel safe, cherished, secure Be held in your arms through my nightmares Until all the hurt becomes a blur Where is my silent knight? The one to save my life? That will slash my demons, Not my flesh? That will vanquish my enemies, Not my dreams? I ask for help with my eyes! I beg him but he doesn't reply This silent knight must come forth Help me before I lost my oath But my mirror keeps silent For my reflection doesn't reply It's inside of me that my knight resides It's up to me, to change my life... *** January 31, 2017

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Date: 2/1/2017 4:33:00 AM
You're my knight in shining armour. Beautiful my friend.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/1/2017 4:58:00 AM
And you are my rock! Thank you, sweetie <3
Date: 1/31/2017 8:25:00 PM
Such a beauty and that voice just transcended your poem to another level...a fav
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/1/2017 4:57:00 AM
Thank you Tim - that means a lot!!! I'm getting less shy in recording my poems ;)
Date: 1/31/2017 6:51:00 PM
Well penned Claudia!! Big Hugggs!! Deb :)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/31/2017 7:27:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Deb!!! hugs back :)
Date: 1/31/2017 6:41:00 PM
A poem of truth..for we all are alone with the fruits of wisdom gathered in our years..question is do we use it for nourishment or allow it to sit and decay
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/31/2017 7:26:00 PM
Perfectly said, Frederic... Some people only gather years on their backs, and not wisdom... ;) Thank you :)
Date: 1/31/2017 6:37:00 PM
It is great that you have come to this realization in life, Claudia, because I don't believe many in life do! Another fine example of your poetic skills! (Sir Gawain was always my favourite Knight from the Arthur Pendragon's knights!)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/31/2017 7:22:00 PM
Thank you Budgie... yeah, I know... usually we are forced to look up inside and find out a strenght we didn't know we had... (And I always loved stories about knights :) )

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