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upon each moment roosts a peacock- fully fanned veiled from trite peruse as keen eyes pause and ponder the faint outline of feathers

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Date: 12/5/2020 6:35:00 AM
clever
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Date: 9/13/2020 2:05:00 PM
Profound, David! (just like some of the best haiku should be)
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Date: 9/6/2020 9:35:00 PM
"each moment roosts a peacock- fully fanned" I never thought of it in that way. So beautiful, and so are peacocks. :) Brandy
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