Finding and Forgiving

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We have seen the need for self-forgiveness. A cluster strengthens in the air quite fast. Oil-painted clouds poised over the liveness. We have grasped the need for self-forgiveness. Creating a scrumptious safe, quaint witness. We all forge faults, yet beware of clouds blast. We have seen the need for self-forgiveness. A cluster strengthens in the air quite fast. Written: February 17, 2023

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/18/2023 9:48:00 AM

We all need to do that and move on but it is hard and we keep bringing up to ourselves for our mistakes, missing the mark, going our own way and plain outright sinning. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/18/2023 6:13:00 AM

Before we forgive others, we must first forgive ourselves.

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/17/2023 7:31:00 PM

Wow , what a powerful poem, and picture, the detail and light within each rain drop to serve it's purpose, : ).