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Find My Way

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Find My Way

Darkness is killing my will to fight
The way to climb beyond my scope
Searching for a ray of light
In an oasis called hope

Feel like a stranger in my house
Drying inward from the edge
Climbing like a spider
Got stuck in my own web

The clouds in the sky
Add to my tears
The balloons in my hand
Do not bring me cheers

Nothing to push me down from here
I can only jump without fear
I break the balloons, I dare the rain
I splash in my web full of my tears

Here I come, you can push me away
I will find my way to dodge you away
Not everytime can I go astray 
A day will come I will find my way

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  1. Date: 6/13/2010 8:19:00 PM
    I found this write of yours very visual, Suresh--really enjoyed the inspiration that it brings--keep writing! --nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/6/2010 10:09:00 AM
    I like your choice of words, quite deep stuff Regards Roger

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 10:48:00 AM
    Nice use of words, but so sad. Roger

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 12:35:00 PM
    Persevere Suresh, you will reach the light. Wonderful encouragement for us all to never succumb to that which would hold us in the dark; excellent poem.

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 11:21:00 AM
    This is sooo well written, Suresh. I think this is the first of your poems I've read, but surely there will be more. Brilliant use of imagery and metaphors! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 10:22:00 AM
    simple yet expressive.. a wonderful read...

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 7:10:00 AM
    Very good writing! Loved the feel of this poem!

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 3:02:00 AM
    Indeed you will Suresh. Excellent writing. Thank you for your kind comments to this female writer. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 8:14:00 AM
    Very nice, I loved it.

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 8:14:00 AM
    well writen... nice flow..

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 8:08:00 AM
    ALL I CAN SAY HOPE IS A GOOD THING. IT ALWAYS LEADS TO THE WAY YOU ENDED YOUR POEM--A day will come I will find my way--NICE ENDING. ENJOYED THE FLOW OF YOUR POEM AS WELL.-Irma

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 8:07:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Suresh. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 7:56:00 AM
    I hope you like my attempt