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Find Me At Six

Find you, find me Find me, find you, swept of warm summer air, as romance floats softly these moments we share Midst sundrenched emotions, found hours now yield, desires of two yearning hearts are revealed When oceans keep time with our true destiny, where love will eternally find you, find me
1/18/17 Written for the: Find Me At Six Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Manny Paras
Date: 1/21/2017 12:54:00 PM
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Man, a dashing poem sweetened by your words. Methinks, there are more than 10 syllables in some lines? Best of luck!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 8:27:00 AM
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There are more than 10 syllables per line, if that was part of the rules, I missed it. My mistake, that is perhaps why I didn't place in the contest or because it wasn't that good. :) Thanks so much for reading and commenting
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/19/2017 6:50:00 AM
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A most lovely and romantic take on the provided picture, Chris. gl in the contest. Regards // paul
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Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:22:00 AM
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Thanks so very much Paul. I appreciate your kindness my friend.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 1/19/2017 6:25:00 AM
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Hi Chris, This is so romantic. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:22:00 AM
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Thank you my sweet friend, so very much.
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Darren White
Date: 1/19/2017 1:38:00 AM
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Good luck Chris. If you're on the winners list, I'll find you ;)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:22:00 AM
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Thanks Darren, I always appreciate the encouragement I receive for you.
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/18/2017 11:55:00 PM
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Love the verse, Chris, good luck in the contest Hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:21:00 AM
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Thank you Eve for your kind words. I appreciate your visits my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2017 4:51:00 PM
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Swept up in your poetic emotion! Lovely, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/18/2017 5:04:00 PM
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Thank you Kim, I always appreciate your kind words
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/18/2017 4:44:00 PM
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Just beautiful Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/18/2017 5:04:00 PM
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Thanks so very much Gary
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/18/2017 3:51:00 PM
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Romance floats...lovely Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 1/18/2017 4:21:00 PM
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Thanks so much Tim. I'm glad you liked this one
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Christy Stover
Date: 1/18/2017 3:39:00 PM
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The whole poem is wonderful but the depth of emotion in the last two lines is exquisite. Amazing poem, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/18/2017 4:21:00 PM
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Thanks, so much Christy. That is such a nice thing to say to me. I appreciate you my friend.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/18/2017 3:32:00 PM
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Those oceans keeping time still ..separating two lovers but not their hearts..So it seems..Eternally beautiful.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/18/2017 4:20:00 PM
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Thank you so very much Charmaine. I am happy you liked this one today. Your kind words always make me smile.

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