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Finally We Tied the Knot

No thanks, was what she first said A phrase that lingered in my head for days Wondering whether she meant what she said My heart was hurting, breaking and aching Thinking, planning and preparing to give it another try for the sake of my heart Changing tact help save situations sometimes Less talking, more helping and companion giving Was what I resorted to, and it produced a prestigious prize She did not admit it at first But she could no longer be at peace away from my place And that formed the beginning of the firm friendship They say the rest is history But to us the rest was a test of time And God guided us in times of trials and temptations We had to part ways in good course As she went to pursue promotional studies For a period they thought our friendship will fade They told her I will move on They told me she will move on But none of us moved on Instead, we finally tied the knot All thanks to Almighty God

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/3/2016 10:44:00 PM
WELL DONE
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Date: 7/22/2014 5:01:00 AM
This is amazing and beautiful. I love the last verse. So exquisite.
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Bakari Matano
Date: 7/24/2014 6:58:00 AM
Thank you Priyanshi, i am happy you enjoyed
Date: 6/10/2014 4:36:00 PM
and they all lived happily ever after should be the final line! - what a testament to true love overcoming all adversities and reaching the goal in the end - loved it!
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Bakari Matano
Date: 7/15/2014 4:47:00 AM
Yes you are right Allison, it should have been ''and we lived happily ever after'' but i did it for the rhyme
Date: 6/10/2014 3:46:00 PM
Great emotion! Good job. Keep writing
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Bakari Matano
Date: 7/15/2014 4:47:00 AM
Thank you Jesse, am haapy you got moved.

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