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The vision of you was always there though I never knew who you were. You would touch me even in deepest dreams I would turn but you were just a blur Ages passed me by without fulfillment Mistakes of the heart were made I gave my heart away in haste Only to find I just was played But there was a grand design in the cosmos Our stars finally crossed from distant skies My dream became a reality When I beheld the smile within your eyes My tired heart feels blessed with new life When I cradle you in my arms at night Just listening to your heart beat next to mine I know your my destiny, my love, my light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/18/2016 2:48:00 AM
Greetings Carl. Congrats for your well,deserved top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:59:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this romantic write Carl.
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Date: 2/17/2016 7:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well done.
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:19:00 PM
Really like it, especially the final stanza, Carl. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/17/2016 12:52:00 PM
Hi Carl, congratulations on your placement in the contest. Enjoyed the poem Carl....Vlad.
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Carl Fraser
Date: 2/17/2016 2:53:00 PM
Thanks Vlad, appreciate the visit. Blessings Carl .
Date: 2/17/2016 10:17:00 AM
Hi Carl, WOW, it was nice to see you and this poem in this (my) contest, congrats on your wonderful love poem. Thanks for Supporting a Skat Contest, while she is away. Love LINDA
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Carl Fraser
Date: 2/17/2016 2:52:00 PM
Thank you Linda, glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the number 2 placement. Im honored. Indeed. Blessings Carl
Date: 2/17/2016 8:42:00 AM
Hi, Carl, thank you for the support. :) SK
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Carl Fraser
Date: 2/17/2016 2:50:00 PM
Your Welcome Skat. Thank you for the placement. Blessings Carl
Date: 2/13/2016 3:07:00 PM
Lovely piece Carl, nice rhyme and flow. Love how you tell it from the heart, really fine stuff!
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Carl Fraser
Date: 2/17/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thx Gordon. Appreciate you stopping by. Blessings Carl
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Carl Fraser
Date: 2/17/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thx Gordon. Appreciate you stopping by. Blessings Carl
Date: 2/12/2016 5:48:00 PM
Good day Carl, I'm just bouncing back from the food coma I was in. Finally, I'm a bit confused because the last time I wrote a poem called finally I was a nut case. LOL, Glad, you are feeling loved. A wonderful canvas to share with those who love reading your poems like I do. Sometimes dreams come true when we least expect them too. Hugs. LINDA
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Carl Fraser
Date: 2/13/2016 3:17:00 PM
Well you have to expect the dream to come true at some point. That's what hope is about. Thanks for understanding the dream, the hope, the message.blessings, Carl
Date: 2/12/2016 12:56:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Carl (7) - I hope you have found love back - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise:) .............. * sweet Valentine !*
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Carl Fraser
Date: 2/13/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise. Perfect time of year to talk about this. Thanks for reading. Blessings Carl

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