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Finally

Fun. Having fun, and playing, just freedom, freedom. Youth, children and, completely free. Time moving fast. Forcing: pushing. Falling not able to stop. Dying, slowly inside: dying. Pain; the sharpness, Tearing, ripping. Welcoming the Pain. Crimson Staining my clothes Running down my Skin. And more, more Pressure… harder. Dizzy, dizzy really dizzy. But still pressing harder and deeper. Blood flowing fast. And the pain; the unbearable torture it’s nice. Slipping deeper, into the dark. The beautiful abyss that is death. Finally.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/15/2013 8:38:00 AM
pretty good keep them coming
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Date: 3/15/2013 7:57:00 AM
beautiful Write Katy..i love it :-)
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Date: 3/14/2013 7:42:00 AM
Ah great,but what opted you to write this piece?
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Date: 3/17/2013 7:04:00 AM
A girl committed suicide in our school. I was merely wondering what it would be like.
Date: 3/14/2013 7:41:00 AM
Yes, the title is perfect and it is a good poem! - Katy, today is yours .... enjoy it ....... have a nice time! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2013 6:01:00 PM
If it were me, I would simply use the last word of this poem as the title: "Finally".
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Date: 3/13/2013 1:31:00 AM
Oh my gosh, yes that's amazing. Can I use it?

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