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Final Peace

Final Peace

We were the last of a Peaceful Race
       And no match for the Evil Lord.
              Trapping us inside our ship,
                     He then reversed the valve
                            To the oxygen...
                                                 Will                      have

deborah burch©


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  1. Date: 6/9/2012 12:46:00 AM
    Very good Nonet in the theme of the contest.

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 10:57:00 PM
    Wow! This is an amazingly good write for a nonet poem.

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 1:39:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Deborah. Hope you have a beautiful evening. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 11:40:00 AM
    I love this clever and imaginative one, Deborah - I'm sure this will be a big winner

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 12:27:00 AM
    Well done Deborah - good poem - wish you luck in contest. - Have a beautiful day to you. - oxox hug Anne-Lise

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 6/7/2012 12:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you dear Anne Lise! You are so special! btw, you do know you are " Anne Assam Tea" in my Peter the Pan story, right?...:-) love you, deb