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Final Peace

Final Peace We were the last of a Peaceful Race And no match for the Evil Lord. Trapping us inside our ship, He then reversed the valve To the oxygen... Suffocating... Us...but...we... Will have Peace... 6/6/2012 deborah burch© nonet

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Kash Poet

Date: 6/9/2012 12:46:00 AM

Very good Nonet in the theme of the contest.

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/7/2012 10:57:00 PM

Wow! This is an amazingly good write for a nonet poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/7/2012 1:39:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Deborah. Hope you have a beautiful evening. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 6/7/2012 11:40:00 AM

I love this clever and imaginative one, Deborah - I'm sure this will be a big winner

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2012 12:27:00 AM

Well done Deborah - good poem - wish you luck in contest. - Have a beautiful day to you. - oxox hug Anne-Lise

Deborah Burch
Date: 6/7/2012 12:42:00 AM

thank you dear Anne Lise! You are so special! btw, you do know you are " Anne Assam Tea" in my Peter the Pan story, right?...:-) love you, deb