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Final Moments' Thoughts

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Below is the poem entitled Final Moments' Thoughts which was written by poet Diane Locksley. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Final Moments' Thoughts

When the Reaper comes calling at your door
  As you're struggling with chest pains on the floor
    And the angst of helplessness strikes your core
      That's when you realize you could have loved more



For Brian Strand's End Rhyme challenge

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  1. Date: 6/30/2011 5:04:00 AM
    A belated congratulations Diane on your win in Brian Strand's "One Single Four Line" contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 9:22:00 PM
    chilling! big kusos to you for garnering a great spot in the contest, diane..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 2:07:00 PM
    oh a sad one here. I much enjoyed seeing this on the winners' list. A big congrats to you, Diane.

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 11:36:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, Diane. Great write. Nice job. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 11:23:00 AM
    awesome poem, congrats on your win Diane..............Francine

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 10:09:00 AM
    Very true, I'd imagine. Many congrats on your win, Diane : )

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 9:07:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Diane! Couldn't agree more with the message here. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 12:06:00 PM
    The last line in this one leaves the reader with something to take away from the poem and ponder about. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your well wishes with my book. I really appreciate your encouragement. Karen

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 8:35:00 PM
    Wow, what a message. Good one. BG