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Final Moments' Thoughts

When the Reaper comes calling at your door As you're struggling with chest pains on the floor And the angst of helplessness strikes your core That's when you realize you could have loved more For Brian Strand's End Rhyme challenge

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/30/2011 5:04:00 AM
A belated congratulations Diane on your win in Brian Strand's "One Single Four Line" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2011 9:22:00 PM
chilling! big kusos to you for garnering a great spot in the contest, diane..:) huggs
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Date: 5/24/2011 2:07:00 PM
oh a sad one here. I much enjoyed seeing this on the winners' list. A big congrats to you, Diane.
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Date: 5/24/2011 11:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Diane. Great write. Nice job. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/24/2011 11:23:00 AM
awesome poem, congrats on your win Diane..............Francine
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Date: 5/24/2011 10:09:00 AM
Very true, I'd imagine. Many congrats on your win, Diane : )
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Date: 5/24/2011 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Diane! Couldn't agree more with the message here. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/23/2011 12:06:00 PM
The last line in this one leaves the reader with something to take away from the poem and ponder about. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your well wishes with my book. I really appreciate your encouragement. Karen
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:35:00 PM
Wow, what a message. Good one. BG
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