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Final Exit

Empty head, gun full of lead, goodbye forever to my despairs Broken heart, it’s sad to part, but it’s clear that nobody cares Please forgive me for my life has been unkind Now I’m sure, it’s time to leave it all behind I've got this twitch, makes my life a ***** and it wont go away I'm getting old, my skin feels cold and my hair is turning grey Love is overrated, the life that we are fated, is one in which i don't desire to stay Setting sun, this time has come; you couldn’t stop me if you tried.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/28/2010 11:27:00 AM
wow deep indeed, but please know the Lord is a loving, caring, and all the the above of great things, go to him in prayer turn from your flesh and you will be blessed, peace to you, daniel sainz
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Date: 10/27/2010 8:36:00 AM
Nice interesting thoughts on final exist, Jamie
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Date: 10/26/2010 1:13:00 PM
Hello Jamie, I can share with you that we have all felt this way at one point or another. Then, something wonderful comes along and we get back up on our feet again. I look forward to reading more of your work. As Always, Shar
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