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Final Destination

Spinning top doesnt stop Nor does the pendulum on the clock Sticks and stones on brittle bones In the end its pointless what you own Scrimp and save, still a slave Nothing follows to the grave Sweet surrender, heavens tender One life passes, another rendered

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/25/2012 7:34:00 PM
Hello Carl, once again,,,, wow... i love the pendulum swinging away... and the top tropping in a spin of non stop... this is the way i want my life.. never to meet the tenderness of death... always~pd
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Date: 11/24/2012 8:26:00 AM
Excellent poem. I love the line "Sweet surrender, heavens tender." Very witty. Great write.
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:44:00 PM
nice write Carl
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