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Final Beginnings

death did not enter the room death built the room I was in a saga worth being exhumed death did not enter the room seeds of guile indeed did bloom slow, malignant, and close to sin death did not enter the room death built the room I was in

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Phyl Losophy

Date: 9/17/2018 12:10:00 PM

Richard, sincere condolences to you and your family... The title you chose for this piece really grabbed my attention... As I was able to relate... Wishing you all the best! Phyl

Ricky Muse
Date: 9/22/2018 2:31:00 AM

Thanks Phyl. A title is vital. All the best...………...peace!

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/30/2018 10:31:00 PM

Richard, deep sad emotions simmer in the poignancy of poetic lines that are rich in captivating emotional imagery and flows smoothly from an intriguing title. A superb soulful piece.. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/1/2018 8:22:00 PM

Richard, I'm so sorry for your loss.. please accept my condolences, my dear friend..

Ricky Muse
Date: 8/31/2018 8:58:00 PM

Thanks Susan. The passing of a loved one triggered this poem. It was written with a tear in the eye.