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Filled With Regrets

Though the did is done but reflecting back,I weep weep!that I did wrong Blinded by selfish motives Lied to cover up my deeds. sentence to five years for a crime not committed... heart filled with regrets *A Tanka and a Senryu CONTEST:"A mesh of forms"by Russel Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/12/2012 5:52:00 AM
Olusegun, congratulations on your win in Russells' contest with this beauty. :) Wilma
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Date: 4/10/2012 7:51:00 PM
Olusegun, congrats on your win with this mesh of forms! Love, Kim
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Date: 4/10/2012 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Russell's "A Mesh Of Forms" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/9/2012 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this mesh of poetry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/9/2012 6:44:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & love
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Date: 4/9/2012 8:58:00 AM
congrats olusegun on a superb win for this brilliant composition and mesh of forms.. so happy u joined in the fun of "Bite ME"....
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Date: 3/20/2012 7:20:00 AM
We all live to learn, my friend, our lives is a concept not perfected before it is handed to us, therefore, life first is a lesson to learn how to survive on a personal level. Perfection will come as we learn to grow into the fullness of Love's script. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/17/2012 11:36:00 PM
Yes, this would cause great regret! Way to do the challenge!! (by the way, the first stanza sounds like a crime was committed but the second one means it didn't really happen?) Just wondering!!
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Date: 3/18/2012 11:55:00 AM
Andrea,Thanks!for your comment.Actually a crime was committed ,but the wrong person was sentence because I lied....That`s the purpose of the regret.I committed the crime....Hahahaha...
Date: 3/17/2012 3:19:00 PM
OA,, deep....good luck in contest.. ..happy st. Paddy day ~ always*PD
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