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Fighting Words

J ust write a poem...that's what it said U nderstanding not a word that has come into my head. S o I just started to write some words to see T hat they might just fit this category. P roperly written in words that you'll read O ver and over I hope to succeed. E ven if I can't say something witty or trite T hen again, let my words say that I've given it a fight. R ight now I can't say that one word here even flows Y es, fighting for words is all a poet does.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/2/2011 6:22:00 PM
Where's your "R" line for "POETRY"? How about "Rough time describing just how it was" to fill in the gap? Otherwise, everything else looks very good.
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Date: 12/28/2010 4:27:00 PM
i think you have done a great job here Daniel.
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Date: 12/28/2010 1:24:00 PM
wonderful take on the challenge Dan :) replied to Soupmail :)
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Date: 12/27/2010 7:36:00 PM
Daniel this is excellent, and you are so right, like the form you have choosen, which makes this poem even more special. Happy New Year. Harry
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Date: 12/27/2010 10:43:00 AM
Dan, what a great approach, I absolutely love your Acrostic.. thank you for always commenting on mine as well.. My holiday is going good thanks.. And yours? Hope 2011 will be an inspiring and awesome year for you :-) WN
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Date: 12/27/2010 10:37:00 AM
Great job Daniel. Exactly what she asked for. Thanks for reading and commenting on mine. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/26/2010 7:20:00 PM
Hello Daniel, I like this, very well done good luck in the contest... As Always, Shar
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Date: 12/26/2010 8:54:00 AM
Wonderful entry with self introspective thoughts, Daniel
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Date: 12/26/2010 2:22:00 AM
i like the sound and feel of your poem, daniel... very creative! best wishes in paula's contest.. nette
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Date: 12/25/2010 9:43:00 PM
I think you did a terrific job of writing "just poetry" well done and best of luck in the contest~~
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