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Fighting God

Fighting God The dearest of dears when He takes away, There's nothing left to live in the lonely world for, Faith in Him dies, as if He's into some foul play, Depression knocks hardest at your door, Fighting with God is the first thought, Only if you could catch hold of Him, Never by your side He is to be sought, Darkness all over, sorrows flow out of the brim, Why can't He send a ray out of His vast ? Why not enlighten and send us cheer ? Why not enable the mortals forget the bitter past ? Why not send peace to wipe the tear ? Introspection His best gift to all Elf, Fighting God is fighting your own inner self ! Written Feb 8th, 2015 For contest "Fighting God" by rob carmack Awarded 9th place

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Date: 2/16/2015 12:17:00 AM
Dr Upma, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/13/2015 11:19:00 AM
What a last line summary. Great writing, Dr. Upma. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/12/2015 9:32:00 AM
UPMA, Congratulations on your lovely win. God bless-Rajat
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Date: 2/12/2015 4:37:00 AM
Congrats Dr. Sharma on this moving poem.
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