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Fighting For a Parking Spot

Sitting in my car waiting for my Cathie dear Not everybody's as nice as us, I fear Fighting for a parking spot Tempers sure flare a lot A wonder they didn't kick each other in the rear © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/18/2015 5:08:00 PM

So true, how people can get so worked up over such trivial things. I quite like this one, Jack! Very nicely done. Always, Laura

Tim Smith

Date: 10/15/2015 1:27:00 PM

Lay down flat and hold that spot...a patient man you're surely not...orange cone or two....or dye your dew....be sure they see you or you'll be splot

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/16/2015 11:13:00 AM

Certainly don't need to dye my doo! LOL Cheers, Mr. Tim

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/15/2015 10:19:00 AM

It's even worse for the Handicapped spot... As others want them an aweful lot... But those that succeed do get caught... Leaving others food for thought... As Yep, They get caught!

Carol Eastman
Date: 10/16/2015 1:08:00 PM

Ours are usually mostly empty too... Making a few people want to sneak into them.

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/16/2015 11:12:00 AM

Around here the spots are usually not totally filled... guess us Canadians are a heaLthy lot!!!! LOL xxx

Judy Konos

Date: 10/15/2015 9:01:00 AM

Get a handicap sign....and let them fight...lol...

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/16/2015 11:08:00 AM

Actually with my brain, I would certainly qualify!!! LOL Love. the old handicapped dude!!! Love, Jake xoxox

Michael Tor

Date: 10/15/2015 8:07:00 AM

Jack its not the parking spots that are the problem its the people fighting for them. Nice point. GOOD MORNING JACK! Go Blue Jays

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/15/2015 8:20:00 AM

GOOD MORNING MICHAEL me friend! You are absolutely right!!! Cheers!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/15/2015 7:11:00 AM

It's a world wide issue Jack - prefer to use the bus and then I write poems on my journey lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/15/2015 8:18:00 AM

Great idea!!! Less stress and time to create!!! Love, Jack xxx