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Fighting Chance

when i think of you........ the world turns in as my heart stops to beat. catching that one last breath to give it a fighting chance, to gain life, is no longer toleratied. You scensor my being like a poisionace snake, leaving me in a emptyness tomb, bleeding eyes of shameless grief, but i live to, strengthen the core, and return the priceless favor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/14/2012 4:35:00 AM
Beautiful! I feel your strength renewed! Cynthia
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 10/19/2012 3:50:00 PM
Thanks Cynthia, for it has for I will always fight for what I believe.....
Date: 9/12/2012 12:57:00 PM
Amazing work~I really enjoyed reading this verse. Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem on 9/11. Always, Laura
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 9/12/2012 6:02:00 PM
thanks a mill laura, your work is amazing as well.. Carma
Date: 9/12/2012 8:14:00 AM
WOW SPEECHLESS,LOVE IT CARMA
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 9/12/2012 6:03:00 PM
there i go again leaving you with nothing to say, but i bet the image was great.. lol
Date: 9/12/2012 5:45:00 AM
Excellent piece, lets the reader feel the emotions in this write.
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 9/12/2012 6:12:00 AM
thank you much, the hard truth and nothing but the truth.....

Book: Shattered Sighs