Fighter

It has no color No flavor Without favor Don t try being sanctimonious Just grow and achieve like birds So insurmountable So unrivaled Yet, belittle Bringing joys Bringing nightmares Yet, you also bring pains Distorting the novice Priceless with huge prices Land of imaginations Land of remarkable joys Where the situation keeps changing rapidly You give a pain of painful loss A god- forsaken pain So indecipherable

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/6/2016 8:25:00 PM

safiyyah ibrahim abdulhamid, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/14/2011 1:40:00 PM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Safiyya. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/13/2011 9:06:00 PM

Nice personification well penned, safiyyah

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/13/2011 10:53:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..

Theresa T

Date: 8/13/2011 8:05:00 AM

I like the line "Priceless with huge prices"