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Fifty Years

The golden cycle of life has begun In half centurys jaunt into the world To look back on the times when we had fun We stared at each other and became one Sharing sadness and joy, anger and glee The future moved on as our children came The sixties came in with our youthful fling To laugh and throw our cautions to the wind The bicentennial in seventy six another ten years of our wedded bliss The nineteen eighties left a tearful glow Of anger, angst and bitter scenes My mid life thoughts had me oft in dismay With dreams of a maiden much younger than I On an isle somewhere that no one could find Your menopause lasted as long as my thoughts And the nineties left us with a common theme Testing our love as the years moved on by The Millennium came without a smile with ocassional moments of chagrin and loss And I am still here a more vintaged man who still loves you now and I always will And life has shown as we continue to fill The time we have left living on the edge Losers Only Poetry Contest Sponsored by Jerry T. Curtis April 4, 2016

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Date: 6/21/2016 1:01:00 AM
RALPH, Congrats on your awesome - win. SKAT
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Date: 5/5/2016 1:07:00 PM
This is is fine piece with soul-reaching quality. I love this so much
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Date: 5/2/2016 2:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/4/2016 9:15:00 AM
Hi BL: thank you for your kind comment.
Date: 4/21/2016 3:32:00 PM
Enjoyed reading about your married journey, Ralph. As in sports, not everybody manages to last many rounds, but in your case you found the stamina to keep on progressing. Wishing you many more years, even though you feel that you're now "living on the edge"!! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/19/2016 1:37:00 PM
Hi Richard: Thank you for your comment. It was a great adventure!
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Date: 4/19/2016 6:58:00 AM
You are blessed because you stayed. Many men could learn from you! I enjoyed this piece very much.
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Date: 4/19/2016 6:57:00 AM
Hi Andrea: Thank you for your comment and forgive me. The first comment was on your 'Should read the fine print." I was answering a few and forgot to put the comment on your great limerick.
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Date: 4/17/2016 7:34:00 PM
wow, Ralph. For me, this sure is no loser's poem. this is awesome. you laid it all out there. may you enjoy fifty years MORE. I bet in these modern times, it might be possible.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/18/2016 7:05:00 AM
Hi Andrea: Great Write. I guess you can say fewer (not truer ) words were never spoken. ha ha.
Date: 4/8/2016 12:31:00 AM
Very nicely described life after flfty. best wishes for the contest...hugs
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Date: 4/7/2016 12:39:00 PM
susch a sensitive, personal write, ralph... winning wishes!..huggs
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/8/2016 2:36:00 PM
Hi nette: Thank you for warm comment.
Date: 4/6/2016 7:24:00 AM
Hi T.J. thank you for the comment.
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Date: 4/5/2016 1:23:00 PM
Thanks , Daniel: Let's hope it's not another N/A.
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Date: 4/5/2016 1:17:00 PM
Thank you, Silent: I'm not aging . I'm evolving.
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Date: 4/4/2016 6:57:00 PM
That's a good poem, much luck in the contest.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/5/2016 1:18:00 PM
Hi Gwen: Nice to know you. THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENT.
Date: 4/4/2016 6:49:00 PM
Great write of heartfelt honesty. Good luck in contest. Should do well. Peace my friend:)
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/5/2016 1:24:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel: Let's hope it's not another N/A.

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