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fifty fifty

touching someone 
that is the key
touching someone
is the key to me
to lean on my shoulder
as you did yesterday
yes, i am sure
that this is the way
for me to reach 
for your hand
and you to grasp mine
to me that is to have
a little more of you
it is more than your hand
but part of your soul
i hold it as if it were pure gold
the story that is told
is poetry in motion
as lovers unfold
and enclose their notions
anytime anywhere
you know i'll be there
kind of devotion
each one knowing 
what the other would do
run to me as i run to you
be with me as i am with you
reach for me as i reach back
nothing on this earth
can ever beat that

Copyright © John Loving III

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  1. Date: 8/21/2013 12:44:00 PM
    You have a natural talent for rhyme and I encourage you to write more of it. Thus far, I have enjoyed everything of yours I've read. Another great poem; kudos!

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 11:09:00 AM
    That is what i call an awesome fifty fifty in a give and take relationship. awesome poem. love phyl

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 3:33:00 PM
    It just gets better if that is possible! What sweet words to tuck away in the heart; to be read many times especially on a rainy day. Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 6:58:00 AM
    Lovely and sweet poem John, well done. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 6:05:00 AM
    Beautiful written John!

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 4:54:00 AM
    Wow really nice John.....feeling it alot! well done

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 11:36:00 PM
    ah yes complete and ever sweet, the lovers game of purest passion, the world can fall into disrepair, delete, as long as i get my ration, great poetry mate....

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 9:56:00 PM
    Sweet write John. I have just sent you soup mail.

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 9:09:00 PM
    ooooing and ahhhhhing at the sweetness and declarations in this poem...enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 7:34:00 PM
    hope it all works out, john, if it's what you really want!!

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 7:32:00 PM
    "Ohhh, I love it. So sweet!! What a darling!! You are a doll, John! Love, Toquyen"

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 6:58:00 PM
    quite nice indeed,,,,have a fantastical day ;}

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 5:01:00 PM
    lovely john!